you have a good chord basis but it is too repetetive and there isn't much to hear as the lead is in beat but that doesn't always work. d'you know what'd also be great? LYRICS or at least a guitar solo that i have to think about working out! but, good try anyway! 5/10 3/5
Your comments definitely are not lost on me. Vocals are something I'd like to add, but not being a vocalist that's not so easy. As for the solo, I'm definitely really a rhythm player. I might see if anyone I know can add one.
I appreciate the comments.
it's good but...
like everything else its not quite perfik. i agree with the above the melody base and the voices but it's sorta repetitive and yes it could be developed to make it longer and less repetive. have a look round at other peeps stuff and get youself inspired brudda! 7/10 3/5
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